I was at home bored when I heard a loud BANG. I wanted to do something so I went out to see what it was it was a big package out the front of my house. I wondered what was inside of the HUGE PAKAGE so. I went to pick up the package but it was way heavier then I expected. So I tried and tried and finally I got it in the house then I rushed to open it and tried to get it out of the package. but it was way to heavy for me to get out
I was sad.
Hamish I found your story interesting to read. As a reader I want to know what was in the package and why the character was sad. A proper mystery.
Hello Hamish,
In Melbourne we have had long periods of lockdown. One of the most exciting things about our lockdown was the arrival of mystery packages!
I loved how you described your curiosity and I understand why your character felt sad not to be able to investigate further and discover what was inside. I’m curious too…..
Well done,
Michelle, Team 100wc
Melbourne, Australia